Today in class we did a story about a tropical Island we had to describe a picture and write about it. I hope you enjoy reading my story about tropical Island.
Tropical Island
I can smell the deep salt water tingle my body and the smell of fresh coconut.
The bombing sun is shining on the rippling water. The mountains in the background look like they are reaching up for the sky. Behind me is the olive green coconut tree throwing their branches around. I can hear the chirping birds in the background happily flying in the litesh blue sky.
As I lay there still I can feel the burning sun shine on my body. I can feel the warmness as I jump into the delichouse water.
I can taste the crunchy salt in my mouth and bite on my jaw. I can taste the salt water when I swallow. As i lay there eating coconut and it tastes like pure fresh white coconut.
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