Today in class we did a story about our bedroom. We had to describe our bedrooms for what they looked like I hope you enjoy my story of my bright bedroom. We were learning how to add detail to our writing.
MY favorite part of my house is my bedroom. I love my bedroom because it is fresh and clean. I have a fabulous view of the next door. I can see trucks coming and going.
I like reading, coloring and listening to music. I have a very squeaky, bouncy bed.
My bedroom is very tidy. I have a queen size bed. My bed is very comfy and it is like you are lying on clouds. My room smells very nice. It smells like fresh vanilla.
On my bed I have a seakwince pillow. It is hot pink and baby pink when you come into my room you will always see my bed is made. My window makes my room shine from the booming sun.
Overall i think my room is the best room in the house because it is bright and colorful.
Talofa Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said the veiw that you have from your bedroom window and how your room smells. You are so lucky to have a queen sized bed. I wish I had one. Do you like to bounce on your bed? I love to bounce on my bed.
Ma te wa Molly.